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Motif
Description in Contemporary Film: A Framework for Observation
By Kerry DiLeonardo
Posted on November 29, 2005
[The
following is reprinted from Seeing, Doing and Writing Movement,
Proceedings of the Motus Humanus Advanced Seminar in conjunction with Motif
Symposium II, July 15-18, 2004, Southern Illinois University Edwardsville,
Edwardsville, Illinois. Jimmyle Listenbee, editor.]
Abstract
Film is a dynamic and widely disseminated medium, which conveys much of its
meaning through the visual image, both via movement of the actors and camera
work. Examination of the carriage scene in Martin Scorceses The Age
of Innocence reveals a microcosm of the film as a whole. The characters
navigate their relationship within societal constraints, expressing great
passion through subtle movement of the hands. Motif description of hand and
camera movement within the scene provides a basis for observation of effort
factors. Hand movement and camera work emphasize space and weight throughout
the scene while flow appears intermittently. Time is seen as an impulse at
the start, and reintroduced near the end of the scene, heralding a drastic
change in mood. A discussion of effort reveals that the scene is expressively
outside of time.
This session will present motif description of hand and camera movement, analysis
of effort elements observed within the scene, and invite further discussion
of the movement. Gestural movement within the scene transitions to include
greater involvement of the body as the characters exceed acceptable bounds.
Shaping of the hands contributes to the meaning of the movement. The integration
of body, shape and space into the previous analysis can provide a greater
understanding of the totality of the scene.
Description of Presentation with Verbal Transcriptions.
(Quotations are from DiLeonardo unless otherwise noted)
Im excited about the possibility of using motif description in
contemporary film, as a framework for observation. The film scene well
look at today is from Martin Scorceses Age of Innocence (1993);
I found the carriage scene particularly memorable, and began to notate and
study the movement while a graduate student.
My initial project focused on hand movement within the scene, and limited
my observations to effort factors. Today Ill briefly summarize that
initial project, but spend the bulk of our time watching the scene and discussing
what we see: I invite you all to continue the process of making observations
In
doing so, I intend to share my enthusiasm for using motif in this context,
dig deeper into this rich film scene and continue my learning process as I
hear your observations.
(Watched the Scene)
This film deals with tension between personal freedoms and constraints
of society. Specifically we have the character of Newland (Daniel Day-Lewis)
who is interested in a woman, Ellen (Michelle Pfeiffer), who has separated
from her husband. Ellen is untouchable and represents freedom
and independence. The carriage scene is a microcosm of the film as a whole,
and confirms for Newland that he cant live in both worlds. The scene
is beautifully concise, lasting two minutes in the 138 minute film. The movement,
of both the actors and the camera, beautifully conveys the meaning in this
scene, so much so, that of 52 lines in the shooting script, virtually half
were deleted in the completed film.
(Reviewed the Score, Figure 1 below.)

There is a staff each for Newland, Ellen, and the camera, which is forward
of the actors. The music in the background was turned off for the purpose
of observationit does not correlate directly with the movement. I observed
the tempo (88 BPM) in the rhythm of the movement. As a commercial for the
accessibility of this approach: virtually all notation in this score is covered
in the first level of Language of Dance® Fundamentals.
In addition to these observations of effort factors, today I would like
to expand observations to include the actors use of the body, space
and shape. Also, Id like for us to consider how the camera, editing,
and lighting/sound create meaning, and how these might be described in terms
of Laban Analysis.
(Watched the scene.)
Id like a volunteer to record notes on the overhead
(Jimmyle Listenbee volunteered.)
Discussion highlights (quotations are from various audience
members):
How much can be conveyed through peripheral/gestural/distal?
Difficult to make observationspoor lighting to see the video,
caught up in the love scene, the camera limits our view of the characters
Similarities to the film Picnichow is peripheral dance
significant in context?
Huge nonverbal shift signals following verbal shift in relationships.
His only shaping occurs when going down toward her wrist. Earlier in
the scene, she shapes while he merely shifted his weight onto his right hip.
She makes first physical contact in the scenesignificant due to class
differences/Victorian societal mores.
Camera notation makes more sense if camera is front. Camera column is
vital in such contexts as documentation (ethnography, research, dance research,
etc.)
Room key from cameras point of view. If from the cameras
perspective, it opens new perspective to identify with.
Possibility of considering the camera another movercould be analyzed
in terms of Laban Space Harmony concepts. Some camera movement can be notated
as Motion Away from any direction, Motion Toward any direction.
We perceive quick cuts as either suddenness or rapid tempoone
or the other. Dissolves may be perceived as sustained time or even flow. Distortion
causes an oscillation between slow motion and sustained time.
(Scores of movement within the scene follow: (Figures 1-3 below)



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